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    Eurydice

      No—

      Orpheus

      You called my name

      Eurydice

      You came

      But how’d you get here? On the train?

      Orpheus

      No, I walked! A long way . . .

      Eurydice

      And how’d you get beyond the wall?

      Orpheus

      I sang a song so beautiful

      The stones wept and they let me in

      And I can sing us home again

      Eurydice

      No, you can’t

      Orpheus

      Yes, I can

      Eurydice

      No—you don’t understand

      Notes on “Come Home with Me Reprise”

      Off-Broadway

      “Come Home with Me Reprise” was, for me, always part and parcel of the “Come Home with Me” idea. I loved that Orpheus’s old come-on line could be repurposed in the underworld, this time as a lifeline for Eurydice. Even the most awkward version of this scene made me want to laugh and cry at once. The NYTW reprise included a lot of repeat language from that era of “Come Home with Me,” like:

      Eurydice: Are you always this confident?

      Orpheus: When I look at you, I am

      Eurydice: When you look at me, what do you see?

      Orpheus: I see someone stronger than me / I see somebody who survives / I see my wife

      I hated I see someone stronger than me / I see somebody who survives in the reprise as much as I did in the original. But those last four words: I see my wife were unbearably emotional to me. The scene continued with this very literal second marriage proposal, which hearkened back to the young man down on bended knee:

      Eurydice: Why are you getting on your knees?

      Orpheus: I’m asking you to marry me / Marry me / Say “I do” / I came all this way to ask you to

      Eurydice: Orpheus

      Orpheus: Eurydice

      Eurydice: The two of us / That is how it would have been / If the world was different / But have you seen the world? / It isn’t beautiful! / It doesn’t change for me and you / No matter how much we want it to . . .

      This was followed by an exchange with the Fates that resembled “Gone, I’m Gone,” “Everything Written Reprise,” and “No One Now”:

      Fates: Can’t you see she made a deal? / Gave her word? / Took a vow? / See, it’s all been signed and sealed / She belongs to Hades now / She belongs to him

      Orpheus: It isn’t true

      Fates: She belongs to him

      Orpheus: It isn’t true

      Fates: She belongs to him

      Orpheus (to Eurydice): Say it isn’t true

      Fates: She belongs to him

      Eurydice: I do

      In my mind, there was tragic irony in Eurydice’s final “I do,” because of the marriage proposal, but I don’t think the audience actually clocked it. I later decided it would be more powerful to have this informational blow to Orpheus come all at once, in “Papers Intro,” from the mouth of Hades himself.

      Edmonton, London, & Broadway

      The elements of “Come Home with Me Reprise” that survived in all four productions were the cosmic “naming” at the beginning and the How’d you get here? On the train? section, culminating in Orpheus’s vow to sing them home, and Eurydice’s You don’t understand. What happened between the naming and the train changed every time, and the reason was this: it was the lovers’ first encounter after a rift that could be seen as a result of Orpheus’s neglect of Eurydice, Eurydice’s abandonment of Orpheus, or both. Did we need to hear an explicit apology, on the part of one or both of them? I tried various times to work in a literal I’m sorry but it always felt awkwardly on the nose. Was there a more subtle way for them to address what had happened?

      The Citadel version of this moment was very brief:

      Eurydice: Orpheus!

      Orpheus: Eurydice / Did you think I would just let you go?

      Eurydice: I couldn’t stay

      Orpheus: I know

      Eurydice: But how’d you get here? On the train . . . ?

      It was beautifully open-ended, but ultimately didn’t say enough. At the National, there was an equally brief exchange:

      Eurydice: Orpheus!

      Orpheus: Eurydice / It’s you and me—it’s alright now

      Eurydice: Alright . . . how? / How’d you get here? On the train . . . ?

      The line It’s alright now felt sentimental, and again, the exchange seemed to gloss over the depth of the conflict. I tried again for Broadway, and this time, Orpheus’s Whatever happened, I’m to blame and Eurydice’s No—seemed to tick the subtle apology box. What I didn’t expect was that Orpheus’s admission that he hadn’t even heard Eurydice call his name (Eurydice: You heard? Orpheus: No—Mister Hermes told me so) would be funny. I was surprised, in Broadway previews, to hear a hearty laugh every time.

      PAPERS INTRO & PAPERS

      Hades

      Young man!

      I don’t think we’ve met before

      You’re not from around here, son

      I don’t know who the hell you are

      But I can tell you don’t belong

      These are working people, son

      Law-abiding citizens

      Go back to where you came from

      You’re on the wrong side of the fence

      Persephone

      Hades, I know this boy

      Hades

      One of the unemployed

      Persephone

      His name is Orpheus

      Hades

      You stay out of this

      Hermes

      Orpheus was a poor boy . . .

      Hades

      Did ya hear me, son?

      Hermes

      You might say he was naive

      Hades

      You better run!

      Hermes

      But this poor boy raised up his voice

      With his heart out on his sleeve

      Eurydice

      No!

      Orpheus, you should go

      Orpheus (to Hades)

      I’m not going back alone

      I came to take her home

      Hades

      Who the hell you think you are?

      Who the hell you think you’re talking to?

      She couldn’t go anywhere

      Even if she wanted to

      You’re not from around here, son

      If you were, then you would know

      That everything and everyone

      In Hadestown, I own!

      But I

      Only buy

      What others choose to sell

      Oh

      You didn’t know?

      She signed the deal herself

      And now she—

      Orpheus

      It isn’t true

      Hades

      Belongs to me

      Orpheus

      It isn’t true

      What he said

      Eurydice—

      Eurydice

      —I did

      I do

      Hades

      As for you . . .

      Everybody gather round!

      Everybody look and see!

      What becomes of trespassers

      With no respect for property!

      Notes on “Papers Intro” & “Papers”

      The instrumental fight scene “Papers” has existed since the earliest days in Vermont. The music was composed by Michael Chorney with a nod to “His Kiss, the Riot.” We called it “Papers” because it accompanied something
    like an immigration raid; if anyone had spoken, they might have demanded Papers! and Orpheus, as a living soul in the land of the dead, had none. In advance of NYTW I began working on an intro for the scene. At one point I even wrote these lines:

      Hades: Let me see your papers, son / Let me see your documents / Or could it be that you have none? / You’re on the wrong side of the fence . . .

      Team Dramaturgy found that concept confusing; we’d gone to all the trouble of making the “ticket” explicit, and this seemed to be another “rule” regarding How to get to Hadestown. The concern was that it would raise unnecessary questions for the audience. But the old title “Papers” remained.

      “Papers Intro” evolved in Edmonton and London as I tasked Hades with delivering the bad news—She signed the deal herself . . . —to Orpheus point-blank. For Broadway, Rachel begged me to add some verbal interjections for Persephone and Eurydice. She felt strongly that we should hear from both women, that they not be relegated to mute-bystander status. This was also a chance to depict, again, New Orpheus’s innocence and naivety. In all previous versions of the scene, Hermes’s narration section looked like this:

      Hermes: Now, Orpheus was a poor boy

      Hades: Did ya hear me, son?

      Hermes: And Hades was a mighty king

      Hades: You better run!

      Hermes: But this poor boy raised up his voice / Even though it was trembling

      That painted a picture of a brave young man, but now we were dealing with a boy who didn’t know any better. It felt right that both Persephone and Eurydice would try to protect him, each in her own way, so I tried to invoke that protectiveness in their text.

      NOTHING CHANGES

      Fates

      Why the struggle, why the strain?

      Why make trouble, why make scenes?

      Why go against the grain?

      Why swim upstream?

      It ain’t, it ain’t, it ain’t no use

      You’re bound, you’re bound, you’re bound to lose

      What’s done, what’s done, what’s done is done

      That’s the way the river runs

      So why get wet? Why break a sweat?

      Why waste your precious breath?

      Why beat your handsome brow?

      Nothing changes

      Nothing changes

      Nothing changes anyhow

      Notes on “Nothing Changes”

      I wrote “Nothing Changes” for the studio album, for two reasons. First, I wanted to give the Fates another song of their own (at the time, their only number was “When the Chips Are Down”). Second, I wanted to give Orpheus an explicit statement to push back against in “If It’s True.” During many long years of development, “Nothing Changes” never changed.

      IF IT’S TRUE

      Orpheus

      If it’s true what they say

      If there’s nothing to be done

      If it’s true that it’s too late

      And the girl I love is gone

      If it’s true what they say

      Is this how the world is?

      To be beaten and betrayed

      And then be told that nothing changes

      It’ll always be like this

      If it’s true what they say

      I’ll be on my way

      Workers

      Huh!

      Hermes

      And the boy turned to go

      Workers

      Huh!

      Hermes

      Cos he thought no one could hear

      Workers

      Huh!

      Hermes

      But everybody knows

      That walls have ears

      Workers

      Huh!

      Hermes

      And the workers heard him

      Workers

      Kkh!

      If it’s true what they say

      Huh!

      Hermes

      With their hammers swingin’

      Workers

      Kkh!

      What’s the purpose of a man?

      Huh!

      Hermes

      And they quit their workin’

      Workers

      Kkh!

      Just to turn his eyes away?

      Huh!

      Hermes

      When they heard him singin’

      Workers

      Kkh!

      Just to throw up both his hands?

      Hermes

      No hammers swingin’

      Workers

      What’s the use of his backbone?

      Hermes

      No pick-axe ring

      Workers

      If he never stands upright

      Hermes

      And they stood and listened

      Workers

      If he turns his back on everyone

      Hermes

      To the poor boy sing

      Workers

      That he could have stood beside

      Orpheus

      If it’s true what they say

      I’ll be on my way

      But who are they to say

      What the truth is anyway?

      Cos the ones who tell the lies

      Are the solemnest to swear

      And the ones who load the dice

      Always say the toss is fair

      And the ones who deal the cards

      Are the ones who take the tricks

      With their hands over their hearts

      While we play the game they fix

      And the ones who speak the word

      Always say it is the last

      And no answer will be heard

      To the question no one asks

      So I’m asking if it’s true

      I’m asking me and you, and you, and you

      I believe our answer matters

      More than anything they say

      Workers

      We stand and listen, listen

      Orpheus

      I believe if there is still a will then there is still a way

      Workers

      We’re standin’ with him

      Orpheus

      I believe there is a way

      I believe in us together

      More than anyone alone

      Workers

      We’re standin’ near him, near him

      Orpheus

      I believe that with each other we are stronger than we know

      Workers

      We hear him

      Orpheus

      I believe we’re stronger than they know

      I believe that we are many

      I believe that they are few

      Workers

      We’re standin’, standin’, standin’

      Orpheus

      And it isn’t for the few to tell the many what is true

      Workers

      We understand him

      Orpheus

      So I ask you

      If it’s true what they say

      I’ll be on my way

      Tell me what to do

      Is it true?

      Is it true what they say?

      Notes on “If It’s True”

      Vermont

      “If It’s True” dates back to the Vermont days, when it was an Orpheus solo. It begins as a lamentation for Eurydice and the world, and the fact that it straddles both heartbreak and politics made rewriting it something of a balancing act. It ends with righteous railing against the powers that be, and those verses (But the ones who tell the lies
    . . . ) have remained intact for many years.

      The earliest version of the song began like this:

      Orpheus: If it’s true what they say / If there’s nothing to be done / If there’s no part left to play / If there’s no song to be sung / If it’s true what they say / If there’s no stone left to turn / If there’s no prayer left to pray / If there’s no bridge left to burn / If it’s true what they say / I’ll be on my way / If it’s true what they say / Then I have lived a lie / They can take the sky away / Take the stars out of my eyes / And my face will be a mask / And my heart will be a stone / And I’ll throw away the past / And I’ll go away alone . . .

      Off-Broadway

      The imagery in those early lines felt generic to me, and not romantic enough for the lover Orpheus. For the studio record, I wanted more intimacy, and I remember scrambling to finish this more intimate version en route to the studio:

      Orpheus: If it’s true what they say / If my love is gone for good / They can take this heart away / They can take this flesh and blood / Take my mouth that kissed her mouth / Take my tongue that sung her praise / Take my arms that used to reach out / In the dark where she lay / If it’s true what they say / I’ll be on my way / If it’s true what they say / If there’s nothing to be done / If there’s no part to be played / If there’s no song to be sung / Take this voice, take these hands / I can’t use them anyway / Take this music and the memory of / The muse from which it came

     


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