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      WAY DOWN HADESTOWN REPRISE

      Fates

      The deal is signed?

      Eurydice

      Yes

      Fates

      ’Bout time

      Get on the line

      Eurydice

      I did what I had to do

      Fates

      That’s what they did too

      Hermes

      Now, in Hadestown there was a lotta souls

      Workers

      Oh, keep your head, keep your head

      Hermes

      Working on a wall with all their might

      Workers

      Huh! Kkh! Oh you gotta keep your head

      Hermes

      Ya see, they kept their heads down low

      Workers

      Huh! Kkh! If you wanna keep your head

      Hermes

      You couldn’t quite see their faces right . . .

      But you could hear them singing

      Workers

      Oh, keep your head, keep your head

      Hermes

      Swinging their hammers in the cold hard ground

      You could hear the sound of the pick-axe ringing

      Workers

      Huh! Kkh! If you wanna keep your

      Hermes

      And they called it

      Hermes & Workers

      “Freedom”

      Eurydice

      (to Workers) I’m Eurydice

      (to Fates) Doesn’t anybody hear me?

      Fates

      They can hear

      But they don’t care

      No one has a name down here

      Mister Hades set you free

      To work yourself into the ground

      Free to spend eternity

      In the factory

      And the warehouse

      Where the whistles scream

      And the foremen shout

      And you’re punchin’ in

      And punchin’ in

      And punchin’ in

      And you can’t punch out

      And you’re way down Hadestown

      Way down Hadestown

      Way down Hadestown

      Way down under the ground

      Workers

      Oh, keep your head, keep your head

      Low, oh, you gotta keep your head

      Low, if you wanna keep your head

      Oh, keep your head low

      Eurydice

      Why won’t anybody look at me?

      Fates

      They can look

      But they don’t see

      You see?

      It’s easier that way

      Your eyes will look like that someday

      Down in the river of oblivion

      You kissed your little life goodbye

      And Hades laid his hands on ya

      And gave ya everlasting life

      And everlasting overtime

      In the mine

      In the mill

      In the machinery

      Your place on the assembly line

      Replaces all your memories

      Way down Hadestown

      Way down Hadestown

      Way down Hadestown

      Way down under the ground

      Workers

      Oh, keep your head, keep your head

      Low, oh, you gotta keep your head

      Low, if you wanna keep your head

      Oh, keep your head low

      Eurydice

      What do you mean, I’ll look like that?

      Fates

      That’s what it looks like to forget

      Eurydice

      Forget what?

      Fates

      Who you are

      And everything that came before

      Eurydice

      I have to go

      Fates

      Go where?

      Eurydice

      Go back

      Fates

      Oh—and where is that?

      So—what was your name again?

      You’ve already forgotten . . .

      Hermes

      Ya see, it’s like I said before

      A lot can happen behind closed doors

      Eurydice was a hungry young girl

      But she wasn’t hungry anymore

      What she was instead, was dead

      Dead to the world anyway

      Ya see, she went behind those doors

      And signed her life away

      Fates

      Saw that wheel up in the sky

      Heard the big bell tolling

      A lot of souls have gotta die

      To keep the rust belt rolling

      A lot of spirits gotta break

      To make the underworld go round

      Way down Hadestown

      Fates, Workers, Hermes

      Way down under the ground

      Notes on “Way Down Hadestown Reprise”

      Workshops

      The first workshop I did with Rachel was the “tough love” table-read in 2013. Mara was there, but we hadn’t yet linked up with NYTW. I was living in Vermont and had a tiny infant, so the whole family traveled to Manhattan and posted up at a Midtown hotel while we worked. We’d begun to identify missing plot points, and one of them was this: We needed to contextualize Eurydice’s rueful soliloquy “Flowers” by preceding it with an underworld “reality check” that revealed Hadestown for what it was. At first, I envisioned this dark news being delivered to Orpheus by the Fates in a loose reprise of “When the Chips Are Down” and “Gone, I’m Gone.” I shared this at the table-read; it was called “No One Now”:

      Fates: Used to be a blushing bride / That was on the other side / Better to forget her face / Now she’s like the rest of us / One more number in a crowd / Maybe she was someone once / She ain’t no one now

      Used to be a loving wife / That was in another life / Carve it on a marble stone / Now she’s like the rest of us / One more body in the ground / Maybe she was someone once / She ain’t no one now

      Brother, don’t you think we all / Used to have a name to call? / A tale to tell as well as her? / Now she’s like the rest of us . . .

      Maybe when she first arrived / So alive, so naive / All the bright lights in her eyes / All her insides fluttering (alt. Heart aflutter on her sleeve) / Maybe she was someone then / Back when Hades drew her in / Like a moth into his flame / Borne aloft on burning wings / Well, she ain’t the first and she ain’t the last / Hades’ fire is hot and fast / Just ask all the other girls / Sweeping up the ashes in the underworld / See even when the flame is new / She doesn’t hold a candle to / The woman Hades truly loves / So maybe she was someone once / But now she’s like the rest of us / All used up, all burned out / Maybe she was someone once / She ain’t no one now

      The song was discarded—it was more “poetic portraiture,” which posed dramatic challenges, and musically it didn’t “swing”—but a lot of the language was recycled a year later when I wrote the first version of the “Way Down Hadestown Reprise.” I wrote it in preparation for a very different workshop: NYTW’s summer residency at Dartmouth College in New Hampshire. This was an immersive two-week creative love affair in which a whole group of very game New Yorkers rehearsed all day and hung out all night, passing around guitars and whiskey and often continuing to rehearse for fun.

      I was still trying to achieve a pre-“Flowers” reality check. I knew I wanted the music to be dark, but not slow; “Flowers” is a dreamy number, and to precede it with any kind of sluggishness made it fall flat. What I couldn�
    �t figure out was who should deliver the song, and to whom! At first it was Hermes’s song, directed at Orpheus. Later it was the Workers’ song, describing their own circumstances. Finally it became the Fates’ song, directed at Eurydice, with the Workers chanting in descant beneath the choruses. At Dartmouth I was exploring an early version of Hermes’s verbal narration. The Hermes part was played by the brilliant Taylor Mac, and this was his advice to Orpheus:

      Hermes: If you wanna get around down here in the tank / Down here in the clink / Down here in the hole / You got to think the way they think / Which is to say, your mind is blank / Which is to say, don’t think at all / Come / I’ll show you how it’s done:

      Mister Hades set us free . . . / To work ourselves into the ground . . .

      Later, he introduced the Workers:

      Hermes: Welcome to the skeleton crew! / Welcome to the chain gang, kid / Lemme introduce you to / The members of the working dead / Old Jack Hammer! Mister Miner / Wandering forever in the catacombs / Working on a hole to China / Diggin’ up them dino bones / Way down . . .

      Sweatshop Sally! Missus Miller! / Workin’ in the cellar where the sun don’t shine / Sad-eyed little Cinderella / Sweeping up the ashes of the summertime / Used to be one a the boss’s pets / Now she’s just another stiff / One night in the boss’s bed / And a lifetime on the graveyard shift / Way down . . .

      Off-Broadway, Edmonton, & London

      For NYTW, I cut many of those verses and gave the remaining ones to the Fates, who made them deliciously vicious. I also inserted a series of recitative exchanges between the Fates and Eurydice. This was something both Rachel and Ken had pushed for: an explicit, beat-by-beat realization on the part of Eurydice that she has made a terrible mistake. Ken described it in cartoon terms like this: “All right! / What? / No! / Oh, shit . . .” My first version of those exchanges leaned toward the abstract:

      Eurydice: I’m free / We’re free / Mr. Hades set us free

      Fates: Mister Hades set you free . . .

      Eurydice: But I don’t understand / You said this was the promised land

      Fates: You sell your soul, you get your due / That is all we promised you

      Eurydice: But don’t you see? / It’s different with me

      Fates: Different than who? / They thought they were different too!

      Eurydice: There must be some mistake!

      Fates: Oh, it was a mistake, alright / And now you got to pay / And pay / And pay for it / For the rest of your life

      The following verse appeared only at NYTW. The song was overstaying its welcome, so I cut it:

      Fates: Heard that mighty trumpet sound / Crossed the river to the other side / Thought you’d lay your burdens down / And rest in peace in paradise / But there ain’t no rest for your weary soul / Hades keeps you toiling / Shoveling coal in a big black hole / To keep his boiler boiling

      Broadway

      With the exception of the verse cut, this song didn’t change in Edmonton or London. During Broadway rehearsals, though, Rachel began flagging it again as a dramaturgical weak point. It was a place she felt we should be tackling head-on a question we’d heard many times over the years: “What is so bad about Hadestown?” In earlier versions of the show, Eurydice had come to the underworld under false pretenses—believing it was the lap of luxury, or that as Hades’s mistress she’d be under his protection. We’d now framed her as a tough, smart character making a clear-eyed choice. She’d come for a job, and she’d gotten that job. She’d willingly sold her body and / or soul in exchange for the security she craved, and now it was hers. For our tough heroine to be appalled by “hard work” was a disservice to her character. Returning to the mythology, I found that what had always frightened me most about the underworld was the idea of “forgetting.” The dead are made to drink of the waters of the River Lethe, which causes them to forget their former lives. This was the river of oblivion in “Way Down Hadestown Reprise.” Numbing and forgetting play a big part in “Flowers.” There was also an early cutting room floor version of “Wait for Me” in which the Fates “brainwashed” Eurydice! The first stanza went:

      Fates: One (one, one) / You forget the sun

      Eurydice: I forget the sun

      Fates: You forget where you come from / You forget the sun

      Eurydice: I forget the sun

      Fates: Two (two, two) . . .

      With that in mind, I took a baby step toward addressing the note, making one change in the Fates’ language. The line that once went: Running his old assembly line from Pluto to the Pleiades became: Your place on the assembly line replaces all your memories. It wasn’t enough for Rachel, who wished the whole scene felt more like “a horror film.” So I went further, adding the series of exchanges that culminates in the Fates’ So, what was your name again? / You’ve already forgotten . . . The rewriting of those interludes was the last thing I finished before we locked the show for Broadway.

      FLOWERS

      Eurydice

      What I wanted was to fall asleep

      Close my eyes and disappear

      Like a petal on a stream

      A feather on the air

      Lily white and poppy red

      I trembled when he laid me out

      You won’t feel a thing, he said

      When you go down

      Nothing gonna wake you now

      Dreams are sweet until they’re not

      Men are kind until they aren’t

      Flowers bloom until they rot

      And fall apart

      Is anybody listening?

      I open my mouth and nothing comes out

      Nothing

      Nothing gonna wake me now

      Flowers, I remember fields

      Of flowers, soft beneath my heels

      Walking in the sun

      I remember someone

      Someone by my side

      Turned his face to mine

      And then I turned away

      Into the shade

      You, the one I left behind

      If you ever walk this way

      Come and find me

      Lying in the bed I made

      Notes on “Flowers”

      “Flowers” didn’t exist in the early Vermont productions, but there was a brief reprise of the long-lost “Everything Written” song that expressed Eurydice’s regret:

      Eurydice: If it’s me—if it’s me you’re looking for / Orpheus, I can’t be with you anymore

      Fates: She signed in blood / She signed for good

      Eurydice: I signed before I understood / And I’d unsign it if I could / But it’s too late / They say that everything is written / Everything written in those stars / Even these lives we’re living / Even this love

      Fates: Seven Sisters . . .

      Eurydice never had a solo feature in Vermont, and I was determined to write one for the studio album. I’d started working, but was exceptionally stuck. At the same time, I’d commissioned my dear friend and brilliant artist Peter Nevins to create linoleum-cut portraits of the main characters as album art. Each character was portrayed with an object—Persephone had a raised cup, Hades held a bird—and usually we’d brainstorm the objects together. We hadn’t spoken at all about Eurydice when Peter showed me his portrait of her, eyes closed, holding a flower. “Why’d you give her a flower?” I asked. “I don’t know,” he said, “it felt right.” It was that image that sparked the lyrics of “Flowers,” and it was that image that ended up on the cover of the studio album, as well as tattooed on my right forearm. It was that image that became a visual touchstone for London and Broadway, both in the storytelling and in the marketing of the show. The flower kept revealing itself, as if by magic, and it was just as Peter said: “It felt right.”

      COME HOME WITH ME REPRISE

      Orpheus


      Come home with me!

      Eurydice

      It’s you!

      Orpheus

      It’s me

      Eurydice

      Orpheus . . .

      Orpheus

      Eurydice

      Eurydice

      I called your name before—

      Orpheus

      I know

      Eurydice

      You heard?

      Orpheus

      No—Mister Hermes told me so

      Whatever happened, I’m to blame

     


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