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      Photo by Jorge Lascar: Amphitheater at Kourion, Cyprus

      ACHILLES

      .

      First we see only Briseis, the narrator, isolated in a pin spot. Up-scrim unseen is a chorus of Greek soldiers led by Patroklos, speaking like a whispered echo

      .

      BRISEIS

      I am Briseis

      only a woman

      .

      And so

      my grasp of truth

      is in shadow

      my story, only a part

      You will forgive me?

      .

      In all of my life before

      I knew

      its purpose was living

      but one day I grew

      to know

      the purpose of life

      is war

      .

      SOLDIERS (Whispered)

      ...is war

      the purpose of life

      is war

      .

      (Very gradually, the soldiers become visible in dim silhouette)

      .

      BRISEIS: When the war started

      .

      SOLDIERS: or why

      .

      BRISEIS: no one knows

      .

      SOLDIERS: No one knows.

      .

      BRISEIS: They say it was a woman...

      .

      SOLDIERS: Helen!

      .

      BRISEIS

      ...running from her husband

      with the second son of Priam

      the king

      .

      So she

      though a queen before

      in the end will be

      like me

      .

      no more

      than a prize of war

      .

      SOLDIERS: (Strong) A prize of war.

      .

      BRISEIS

      My life before

      was a garden-

      fine parents ruling the valley

      three brothers standing

      like tassled grain

      so tall-

      .

      but all

      were cut down

      cut clean

      one dark summer's eve

      when I

      became the prize

      of Achilles

      .

      (Space opens with night behind scrim; Chorus may create crickets, owl, stillness. As Briseis' story goes on, goat bleats, neighing horse, isolated sounds of a raid punctuate her description.)

      .

      BRISEIS

      A goat bleat

      in midnight air

      came first

      Then came the clash of bronze

      .

      BRISEIS and SOLDIERS: (Whisper) What moves on the mountain?

      .

      (Briseis, or shadows on scrim, may mime waking her husband, and etc- )

      .

      BRISEIS

      I touched

      my soft-breathing husband

      gathered a fleece

      round my shoulders

      stepped to the door

      .

      Torch light

      flickered

      on white walls below

      Voices rose

      startled

      from sleep

      .

      I saw my brother

      slight in his tunic

      struggling with another

      all armed

      .

      SOLDIERS: Another all armed

      .

      BRISEIS

      Then a grunt and a fall-

      a sword blade came free

      laying open the deep belly

      of my brother

      there on white stones

      .

      SOLDIERS

      As the others came running

      too late for all three

      .

      BRISEIS

      My throat

      opened to scream

      but a hand sealed my mouth-

      my sweet husband breathing

      "Be still. Stay still"

      and seizing his sword from the wall

      .

      (Chorus creates sounds of raid - donkey brays, swords clashing, muffled yells)

      .

      SOLDIERS

      Donkeys brayed

      Armor came clanking

      .

      BRISEIS

      "No," I cried, "Stay!"

      but too late

      Already a torch blazed

      cross his face

      Gleaming silver filled our door

      I staggered

      my eyes frozen open

      .

      A sword's point

      caught my sweet's chin

      uprooting his teeth

      splitting his tongue

      twisting up into his brain

      .

      Blood rushed down that sword

      I saw it and then saw no more

      But I heard as I fell

      a soft voice

      .

      PATROKLOS

      "Don't weep, pretty child

      I'll see you married now

      to a prince, a young god?

      .

      SOLDIERS and PATROKLOS

      ?the finest

      in all the world wide"

      .

      BRISEIS

      That voice was Patroklos

      the kindest of men

      .

      SOLDIERS: And the silver death-bringing god...

      .

      BRISEIS:?was Achilles

      .

      (Immediate shout from the soldiers, with drum beat)

      .

      SOLDIERS: Achilles. Call Achilles!

      .

      PATROKLOS

      Achilles the champion

      Our fastest, our best

      Achilles!

      .

      (Soldiers sway with drum beat, becoming fully lit upstage of scrim, Agamemnon at their head)

      .

      SOLDIERS

      Nine long years of seige

      but Troy's wall

      still stands

      (Shout)

      Agamemnon!

      .

      Nine long years of seige

      but Troy's wall

      still stands

      Agamemnon!

      .

      PATROKLOS

      Men and ships came

      All the kingdoms of Greece

      for Agamemnon

      .

      SOLDIERS

      Nine long years of seige

      but Troy's wall

      still stands

      Agamemnon!

      .

      PATROKLOS

      We came for the woman

      came for revenge

      with Agamemnon!

      .

      SOLDIERS

      Agamemnon

      King of Mycenae

      golden kingdom of Greece

      .

      PATROKLOS

      We came with Agamemnon

      came for his brother's wife

      for Helen of Sparta

      .

      SOLDIERS: Now Helen of Troy!

      .

      BRISEIS:

      The armies were bored

      they had nothing to show

      .

      SOLDIERS: No reward!

      .

      BRISEIS: So they ravished our mountain

      .

      SOLDIERS

      We ravished the mountain

      for prizes

      nights of pleasure

      a dancing feast

      .

      BRISEIS

      Now I am the prize of Achilles

      but Patroklos

      dear friend

      promised true

      .

      Achilles took me

      not rudely

      without anger

      through my tears

      .

      SOLDIERS

      Nights of pleasure

      spoil and prizes

      a dancing feast

      .

      BRISEIS

      Still, the best prize

      is Agamemnon's


      .

      SOLDIERS

      The blushing daughter

      of a powerful priest!

      .

      (Sudden bright image, upscrim, of Chryseis, the priest's daughter)

      .

      (Chorus: noisy partying gradually overwhelmed, stilled by single ominous tone as dawn rises)

      .

      PATROKLOS

      But at dawn

      when the rose-flame ball

      lifts through the mist

      its trail burning purple

      straight across waves

      straight up the sand

      .

      SOLDIERS

      But at dawn

      something new

      breaks on land

      .

      (Chryseis' image is disappearing)

      .

      BRISEIS:

      A whisper

      a fearful word

      comes wafting

      from tent into tent

      .

      (Soldiers begins whispers that will swell)

      .

      PATROKLOS

      A whisper

      wakens the living

      to quiver

      to hide

      to draw tent-flaps tight

      .

      BRISEIS: But too late

      .

      SOLDIERS: (Barely audible) The plague...the plague

      .

      BRISEIS and PATROKLOS

      The whisper

      the fearful word

      still hurries on

      licentiously curling

      like mist before dawn

      .

      SOLDIERS: The plague. It's the plague!

      .

      (The scrim lifts; the Soldiers, plague-stricken, swarm - a living fresco of victims. Briseis, surrounded, moves upstage, hidden behind Soldiers who writhe-)

      .

      SOLDIERS (Individuals and Chorus)

      Some god has sent us this

      Infection!

      Stay away!

      What can we do?

      Stay away!

      No, save us! Save us!

      Stay away!

      .

      (Achilles entering; Soldiers swarm to the side, giving Achilles a grand entrance)

      .

      SOLDIERS

      Achilles! Call Achilles!

      Achilles the champion

      the fastest, the best

      Call "Achilles"

      and all Trojans

      even Hector the mighty

      hide behind walls

      Achilles!

      .

      (Achilles is within reach; some gasping victims try to reach him, while others hold them back. Soldiers plead-)

      .

      Help us, save us, heal us please!

      .

      (Achilles stops, aware of their reaching for him: instant silence)

      .

      ACHILLES

      They are soldiers

      Do not hold them from me

      .

      (A hesitation, then one soldier speaks)

      .

      SOLDIER

      Great Achilles

      They have the plague

      .

      (Loud murmuring, as soldiers verify their condition)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Then their need is great

      Do you think I fear plague?

      .

      SOLDIERS

      Great Achilles

      fleet as wind

      loved by the gods

      Tell Agamemnon

      Beg him for us

      You can speak

      and you can save

      .

      It is Agamemnon

      the omens tell us

      it is he

      who brought the plague

      .

      (Agamemnon enters self-satisfied, leads Chryseis the priest's daughter, her eyes shyly averted)

      .

      (Achilles gestures sharply; soldiers surround him. He bends to listen to them. Agamemnon stops, imperiously)

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      What is this howling

      this chaos?

      And who says

      I am the cause!

      .

      SOLDIERS: Help us, save us, heal us, please!

      .

      SOLDIER

      Great Agamemnon

      leader of the armies

      they have the plague!

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      I can see what they have

      Clean it up

      whatever it takes!

      No attack can be launched

      not even defense

      in this state

      .

      (The soldier bows, but looks helplessly to Achilles)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Great leader

      a way has been whispered

      .

      AGAMEMNON: To rid us of this plague?

      .

      ACHILLES

      One way

      But the soldiers have fear

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      Damn their fear!

      What is the way?

      .

      ACHILLES: A beautiful girl

      .

      AGAMEMNON: (Startled, but pleased) My prize?

      .

      ACHILLES: She's the daughter of a priest?

      .

      AGAMEMNON: And amazingly adept

      .

      ACHILLES: Her father came to beg for her?

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      Pathetic, yes

      He offered ransom

      .

      ACHILLES: And you refused?

      .

      AGAMEMNON: I threw him out

      .

      ACHILLES

      You refused

      And we have plague

      .

      AGAMEMNON: What?

      .

      ACHILLES and SOLDIERS: And so we have plague

      .

      (Agamemnon swells with anger, eyes flashing with rage)

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      No!

      Damnable priests

      They prophesy

      nothing but evil!

      It cannot be so

      .

      ACHILLES: There is one way to know

      .

      AGAMEMNON: (Explodes) No!

      .

      (The soldiers, dismayed, groan, cough, seem worse. Agamemnon, looks them over, then at Chryseis, knowing the omen is true)

      .

      ACHILLES: Send her home

      .

      (Agamemnon is furious, anguished, but draws himself up proudly)

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      Let no one say

      Agamemnon

      does not tend his troops

      .

      (Chryseis looks up hopefully, steps forward)

      .

      If she must go

      I'll let her go

      .

      (The soldiers rouse feebly, joyful. Chryseis bows gratefully to Achilles)

      .

      AGAMEMNON (Furious)

      But you

      must find me another!

      .

      (Achilles, mild until now, turns on Agamemnon, suddenly angry)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Insatiate dog

      How!?

      We have no standing pool

      of women

      .

      (From the soldiers, Patroklos steps toward Achilles, worried, a restraining hand out, while Achilles goes on raging)

      .

      ACHILLES

      All prizes

      have been given

      Do you intend

      to take one back?

      .

      (Agamemnon smiles at Patroklos, nods toward Chryseis)

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      Release her

      Send her home

      Accept no ransom

      .

      (Joy from all. Two soldiers make a way for Chryseis as she begins to move out. But Ach
    illes, wary, senses Agamemnon's intention)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Return her

      to her father now

      and get another

      when we ravish Troy

      .

      Unless you think

      we never will?

      .

      (Agamemnon, still smiling, ignores Achilles' challenge. Chryseis is gone)

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      So you keep your prize

      while I give up mine?

      No. Let the Greeks

      find me another...

      .

      or I take Briseis

      .

      (Achilles, restrained until now, explodes)

      .

      ACHILLES

      My prize?!

      Arrogant snake

      You're full of nothing

      but lust and greed

      Why should I fight for you?

      I'll leave!

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      Then leave!

      What do I need

      with a strutting

      acid-tongued pup?

      You set yourself

      equal to me?

      Now feel the power of Agamemnon

      King of kings

      Give her up!

      .

      (Enraged, Achilles roars and draws his sword. But just as he raises it to strike, his head jerks backward; he is frozen in dazzling light)

      .

      VOICE OF ATHENA: (Amplfied) Stop your sword!

      .

      (Light and sound projections as Briseis narrates the supernatural moment)

      .

      ACHILLES: (To the light) Let go!

      .

      BRISEIS

      Down swept Athena

      golden daughter of Zeus

      unseen by all

      but her dear Achilles

      With her terrible eyes

      ablaze

      she yanked his fiery hair

      .

      VOICE OF ATHENA

      Put back your sword

      Slash him only with words

      Another day

      he will pay

      Obey!

      .

      (Achilles head is released. Alarmed, Patroklos has his hand on Achilles as he speaks to Agamemnon. Achilles lowers his sword, still gazing upward)

      .

      PATROKLOS

      Wise Agamemnon

      Though you have more power

      do not take the girl

      that was given to him

      And Achilles, you...

      .

      ACHILLES

      The Goddess stopped my hand.

      I would have killed him, Patroklos

      .

      (Agamemnon stands calm, smiling)

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      Soft-voiced Patroklos

      this quarrelsome boy

      does not deserve you

      .

      (Achilles whirls on Agamemnon)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Wine-sot! Dog-face

      without any gut!

      .

      PATROKLOS

      Achilles, please

      You owe him allegiance!

      .

      ACHILLES

      He's not my Lord!

      I am a Prince!

      .

      (Challenging Agamemnon)

      .

      Do you ever

      stand in frontlines

      of the battle?

      When do you venture

      on a raid?

      .

      AGAMEMNON: (Warmly, to Patroklos) Why not leave him?

      .

      ACHILLES

      Never!

      Never do you dare

      a fight!

      .

      PATROKLOS (Sadly)

      Achilles

      You're making

      the Trojans rejoice

      .

      ACHILLES (Spins on Patroklos)

      I have no quarrel with Trojans!

      What have Trojans done to me?

      Have they raided my cattle, my horses

      Have they cut my harvests

      from off the rich plain?

      No!

      I came to battle

      for this man's revenge

      and he, he alone

      offends me

      .

      (Achilles whirls on Agamemnon in a towering rage, raising his scepter in the air. Soldiers cower, terrified at Achilles' rage)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Thief!!

      By this scepter

      which will nevermore sprout leaf

      or shoot or bud

      being once carved from its tree

      I swear

      in the day of your distress

      when you come to fall

      at the hand of Hector

      you will look and not find me

      you will know not what to do

      you will tear your heart with rage

      for the day you insulted

      the greatest of the Greeks

      .

      (Achilles hurls his scepter to the ground. Stunned pause. Soldier who took Chryseis away runs on excited, but stops, frightened by the stony silence)

      .

      SOLDIER (Announcing)

      His daughter is delivered

      safe to the priest

      .

      (Soldiers straighten, feeling beginning of relief from plague, but all still riveted on Achilles' glare at Agamemnon)

      .

      AGAMEMNON (Looking at Achilles)

      Patroklos?

      Give me his girl

      .

      (Patroklos looks at Achilles, who doesn't flinch)

      .

      ACHILLES (Softly)

      Yes

      It is fit

      .

      It was you who first

      brought her to me-

      .

      Bring Briseis

      .

      (Patroklos troubled, moves to get Briseis. Soldiers part, and Briseis is revealed happily approaching Achilles, who looks longingly at her, then turns away)

      .

      (Patroklos holds out his hand and Briseis steps forward to go with him, but when she sees she's where he's leading her, she sadly turns to gaze back at Achilles when she is handed to Agamemnon)

      .

      (Achilles refuses to watch as Agamemnon exits with Briseis, in grand procession. The soldiers, relieved the plague is lifting, follow Agamemnon, cheering)

      .

      (The stage grows darker and darker while Achilles is left alone; he is now at the edge of the sea in a storm. Sounds of waves crashing, and rolling surf)

      .

      (Alone, a gigantic roar erupts from Achilles. When he has roared to the peak of his anguish, he weeps. When his weeping becomes deep and loud, he calls-)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Thetis. (Waits) Thetis!

      .

      (The surf becomes louder, and Achilles calls his loudest-)

      .

      Mother!!

      .

      (Sudden quiet, then softer wave music. Then, out of dark sea and mist, Thetis comes dancing. A grand, mysterious entrance. Sea may be created only by lighting and sound, or by colored streamers, flowing fabric, and mime)

      .

      (When Thetis sings, the Chorus may echo her, singing from offstage. When he sees Thetis coming, Achilles joins her dancing beside the waves)

      .

      THETIS

      Seek no answer

      from the sea

      The rolling mother of all

      knows not why

      she needs no reason

      to be

      .

      She only flows

      bounded by

      dappled sway

      deep streaming light

      dancing bright

      through indigo

      turquoise

      marine

      .

      Seek no answer

      from the sea

      she knows
    not why

      she needs no reason

      to be

      .

      Only flow

      in tomorrow

      Let it embrace you

      leaving no trace

      of today

      .

      Seek no answer

      from the sea

      Only flow

      Be still and know

      your future

      in her endless

      sigh

      .

      (Thetis teases Achilles back and forth with the dance, says laughing-)

      .

      THETIS

      There once was a boy

      who ran off to the sea

      Was it you?

      .

      But he ran and he ran

      so fast

      faster than even the wind

      had seen

      a boy run

      .

      Then he sang and he sang

      so well

      better than even the birds

      had heard

      a boy sing

      .

      So they whispered

      he must be a God...

      What does this boy

      want with me?

      .

      (Achilles, drawn away from his sorrow, laughing, suddenly remembers his anguish, and sits abruptly, rude-)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Why do you ask

      what you know?

      .

      THETIS

      You seldom call

      You've become such a man

      .

      ACHILLES: Agamemnon...

      .

      THETIS: He's no one beside you

      .

      ACHILLES

      He dishonored me!

      He stole my Briseis

      The woman. My prize

      .

      (Thetis suddenly frightened, leans to stroke Achilles)

      .

      THETIS

      Calm. Oh, be calm

      Not too much anger

      dear son

      born in pain

      only to die

      do not choose

      to be taken too soon

      by the greedy God

      ruby-stained War

      Calm. Oh, be calm

      .

      ACHILLES

      Like waves at dusk, Mother

      I'm glass-smooth

      And I will not fight

      .

      THETIS (Joyful)

      You'll leave the war?

      You'll go home!

      .

      ACHILLES

      Perhaps I will

      but first I need

      a deed you alone

      can do

      .

      (She is over-joyed, embraces, cradles him)

      .

      THETIS

      I can save you from all

      but death

      .

      ACHILLES

      It's a promise, then?

      You'll do this favor for me?

      .

      THETIS: Whatever you need

      .

      ACHILLES

      Then make sure

      the Greeks lose

      .

      THETIS: (Frightened) Your own side lose?

      .

      ACHILLES: Someone must lose

      .

      THETIS: Then Hector wins

      .

      ACHILLES: Hector is worthy

      .

      THETIS

      But I fear him

      Him beyond all

      .

      (As though from out of her mind, Hector appears, upstage, a powerful, mysterious figure. She sways, beginning her exit)

      .

      THETIS

      Seek no answer

      from the sea...

      .

      ACHILLES: Is he stronger than me?

      .

      THETIS: None is stronger than you

      .

      ACHILLES: (Bitterly) No one mortal

      .

      THETIS

      But him

      you must fear

      .

      ACHILLES: I must fear?

      .

      THETIS

      Soon after he dies

      so will you.

      .

      ACHILLES (Sharply)

      But I have your promise?

      The Greeks will lose

      .

      THETIS (Sad, vanishing)

      You do

      I know not why

      the Trojans will rise

      I only flow

      Be still and know

      .

      (A bold battle cry, and Trojan soldiers come running on, to surround Hector)

      .

      TROJAN SOLDIERS: (Marching chant) Hector! Hector!

      .

      (Upstage of them, in kingly state, appears Priam, looking on. In great spirits, they take battle stances, tumble, march)

      .

      THETIS (Voice amplified)

      With the ancient pride

      of Priam their King

      the Trojans will rise

      and a thousand spears clash

      with one trumpeting voice

      to boldly rejoice

      .

      PRIAM

      My brilliant son, Hector-

      Rejoice!

      .

      (Thetis and Achilles are gone)

      .

      HECTOR

      My honored father

      We Trojans strike harder than Greeks

      here under the eyes

      of our children

      and wives

      .

      SOLDIERS

      Hector! Hector! Hector!

      His face grows dark

      as sudden night

      his eyes flash fire

      like lightening in a storm

      as we strike

      in a raging pack

      close on the cry

      of Hector

      .

      PRIAM

      Strike as you will

      fulfilling

      my ancient pride

      for Achilles

      sits coolly

      aside!

      .

      (A great cheering battle cry; then sounds of battle, as the stage darkens and the soldiers swirl into the fight. Last seen - roaring Hector as Priam salutes him)

      .

      (Isolated light on Briseis. Behind her, the tent of Achilles is swirled into place)

      .

      BRISEIS

      A prize is passed on

      and no one asks

      Is there a difference

      'tween tent and tent?

      Oh yes

      .

      The tent of Achilles

      yes, I remember

      .

      If I woke with pain

      on my heart

      for the arbor of clustered grapes

      over my hearth-room door

      or the three olive trees

      on the hill

      there came music

      soft from beyond the drape

      delicate music

      smoothing my tear-stained face

      .

      (Achilles may enter like a dream)

      .

      Light gathered round

      his face and limbs

      moving on him

      like an easy cloud

      .

      I shied

      like a kid

      behind its mother

      In the sunset's wash

      of orange gold

      the murmur and sudden laugh

      of old stories told

      new politics and plans

      were never denied me

      .

      He minded not

      my listening

      would even stop

      to explain

      though I

      was only a woman

      .

      (Dawn. Achilles sits alone, playing a harp, in his tent)

      .

      BRISEIS

      But now I am gone

      and he sits with his harp

      alone...


      .

      (Scene expands to Achilles' idle soldiers sluggishly cleaning their weapons)

      .

      BRISEIS

      ...while his soldiers

      grow old

      their purpose in life

      no longer sharp

      out of battle

      .

      (Briseis disappears when the soldiers speak, surly and bored)

      .

      SOLDIER 1

      Watch where you swing

      that thing

      .

      SOLDIER 2

      Aw, go soak yours

      in brine

      .

      SOLDIER 3

      You, pretty face

      were in my dream

      .

      SOLDIER 1: And you in mine

      .

      SOLDIER 3

      That old watchdog at home

      was screwing your wife

      .

      (They fight, but Achilles strikes a strong chord and begins a story-song-)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Sing a song

      of Peleus

      chosen by the gods

      .

      SOLDIER 2: Chosen for what?

      .

      ACHILLES

      To play a slippery game

      under a blistering

      moon

      .

      SOLDIER 3: Chosen why?

      .

      ACHILLES

      Why is a long

      winding tale

      Why is a falling

      of stars

      .

      SOLDIER 1

      Then sing "Peleus"

      the song of your father

      .

      SOLDIER 2

      Sing Peleus

      sire to Achilles

      .

      ACHILLES

      Deep beneath

      flowing crystal

      way down under

      clear green waves

      quietly was born

      a thing of such grace

      that the king of the gods

      came near to lose his place

      .

      SOLDIER 3: That isn't Peleus

      .

      SOLDIER 1

      That's Thetis

      his mother

      .

      ACHILLES

      She knew only

      the melody of waters

      the wisdom of the sands

      no trace of the powers

      her grace could command

      .

      Old man of the ocean

      he saw Thetis first

      could barely contain

      the mighty thirst

      she aroused

      He wanted marriage

      .

      SOLDIER 3: That's Poseidon?

      .

      ACHILLES

      But already his brother

      the king of the skies

      had seen the lightning

      in Thetis' eyes

      She must be his bride

      .

      SOLDIER 1

      That's Zeus

      but come to Peleus!

      .

      ACHILLES

      The stage was set for battle

      rival kings of sea and sky

      while the female

      commanding all

      cared for nothing

      but the tides

      .

      But before

      the sky-god winner

      could claim Thetis

      for his bride

      a potent sign

      swept down to drown

      these love-crazed rites

      .

      SOLDIER 3 (Boldly, as oracle)

      A son of Thetis

      will be mightier

      than his father!

      .

      SOLDIER 2: Hah. That will limp his stick!

      .

      ACHILLES

      If Zeus so wed

      the poor sky-god

      would live in dread

      of being overthrown

      by his own

      son

      He could not have her

      .

      And furthermore

      to be sure

      he must forestall

      by any means at all

      Thetis from bearing sons

      of power

      .

      SOLDIER 3: Get Peleus!

      .

      ACHILLES

      Yes, Peleus

      A fine man

      but mortal

      A son greater

      than Peleus

      would threaten

      no god

      .

      (Soldiers begin to mime the story; it may be danced in silhouette on the scrim)

      .

      SOLDIER 1

      So the gods

      showed this mortal

      .

      SOLDIER 2: Peleus!

      .

      SOLDIER 3: Where to wait

      .

      ACHILLES

      Behind a jutting rock

      on a tiny island

      unknown to men

      Sandy cove

      cave underwater

      inlet sparkling

      turquoise

      "She'll come naked

      to bathe at noon"

      they told him

      so Peleus would wait

      .

      They had warned him

      to blind his eyes

      for in seeing her

      he would lose

      the strength to attack

      .

      When she came swimming near

      he did not forget

      and pulled a weed-clogged net

      before his eyes

      When he heard Thetis climb

      onto the rock

      he dived

      and caught her by surprise

      She struggled mightily

      turning first...

      .

      SOLDIER 2: Into a dolphin!

      .

      ACHILLES: Huge, leaping off the rock

      .

      SOLDIER 3: But he clung fast

      .

      ACHILLES

      She turned next

      into an octopus

      squeezing

      the life from him

      .

      SOLDIER 1: But he still breathed

      .

      ACHILLES

      She turned then into

      a slippery serpent

      then a spiny clawing lobster

      then an ink-spitting fish

      .

      So for hours and hours

      he clung gasping

      sticky, stung

      covered with ink

      until she yielded

      lying at last

      herself

      within his arms

      and they slaked passion then

      rolling foam-tossed

      in the waves

      .

      SOLDIER 2: Come to the wedding gifts now

      .

      SOLDIER 3: Come to the son!

      .

      (Achilles looks up suddenly, seeing Patroklos exhausted, at the tent's entrance)

      .

      SOLDIER 1: Patroklos!

      .

      SOLDIER 2: How goes the war?

      .

      PATROKLOS

      Not well

      .

      (Soldiers cheer)

      .

      For the Greeks

      .

      SOLDIER 1: (Confused) What?

      .

      SOLDIERS: Tell! Tell!

      .

      PATROKLOS: I don't have that much breath

      .

      ACHILLES: But they'd like to hear

      .

      PATROKLOS

      How can they hear?

      Roaring surf

      against the dry shore

      is not so loud

      as the deafening scream of death

      released by our armies

      .

      ACHILLES: That's well.

      .

      (Soldiers gasp, staring at Achilles)

      .


      PATROKLOS: Achilles, you must come to fight!

      .

      (Achilles turns away)

      .

      SOLDIER 1: Was Hector there?

      .

      PATROKLOS: Hector ran

      .

      SOLDIER 2: He ran?

      .

      PATROKLOS

      Close on the heels

      of our fleeing Greeks

      like a lion snapping their backs

      butchering the last

      spurring the rest

      with terror

      .

      (Achilles laughs. Soldiers shrink from Achilles toward Patroklos-)

      .

      SOLDIER 2 and 3: Tell, tell!

      .

      PATROKLOS

      I saw Chromios caught in his buttock

      The spearhead drove

      past pelvis bone

      into his bladder

      .

      He dropped to his knees

      with a gasp

      then extending like a worm

      let his dark blood

      drench the earth

      .

      SOLDIERS: (Reacting lustily) Uuuhaah!

      .

      PATROKLOS (To Achilles)

      That was Chromios

      composer of sweet verses

      Do you still laugh?

      .

      (Achilles does not respond; Patroklos presses-)

      .

      PATROKLOS

      Abas, only joy of his father

      was struck on the forehead

      over the nose

      smashing the bones

      so both eyes dropped

      and lay in the dirt

      at his feet

      .

      (Soldiers terrified, but afraid to cry, giggle like children at a horror movie)

      .

      ACHILLES: Patroklos, what are you doing?

      .

      (But Patroklos expands, like a comic giving his audience more-)

      .

      PATROKLOS

      Hector even speared Phaistos

      planter of seedlings

      who stumbled

      on the rim of his own shield

      running

      to get to the ships

      so "pop" - with nothing but his belly

      Phaistos received Hector's spear

      then like a helpless turtle

      squirmed

      .

      (Soldiers' laughter explodes, but Patroklos breaks down. Stunned silence, except his weeping)

      .

      ACHILLES

      What is it

      Has your father died?

      Or mine?

      You look like a child

      who's run after his mother

      begging to be held

      pulling on her dress

      .

      PATROKLOS: People are dying!

      .

      ACHILLES: It's a war

      .

      PATROKLOS

      They're our friends!

      Gods save me

      from anger like yours

      .

      ACHILLES

      What's wrong with dying?

      Life is only a moment

      we all will lose

      .

      PATROKLOS

      You feel nothing!

      You're not human

      Don't tell me

      your father was Peleus

      It was the grey sea

      smashed

      on towering rocks

      that bore you

      in the image of a man

      Where is your loyalty?

      .

      ACHILLES: I am alone.

      .

      PATROKLOS

      Not when you've pledged

      to fight with the armies!

      Where is your honor?

      .

      ACHILLES

      Ask Agamemnon!

      It is he

      who took it from me

      .

      PATROKLOS

      The Trojans

      have reached our ships

      and you sit

      pouting like a child!

      Will you fight?

      .

      (No response)

      .

      Then let me!

      .

      (Startled, Achilles looks sharply at Patroklos. Briseis and Thetis apart, alarmed)

      .

      BRISEIS: No...

      .

      THETIS: (Amplified whisper) No...

      .

      ACHILLES: You?

      .

      PATROKLOS

      Let me go fight!

      With your men

      .

      ACHILLES (Roars)

      With men

      who whine and grumble

      behind my back?!

      .

      (Patroklos scared, freezes. But Achilles suddenly laughs, magically playful)

      .

      ACHILLES

      You call me

      a pouting child?

      Then let's play-

      Pretend you're me!

      .

      Stand here, my friend

      and prepare

      to wear a gift

      from the gods

      Bring me Peleus' wedding gifts!

      .

      (The Soldiers at first surprised, then run to bring Achilles' gleaming armor. Briseis and Thetis, as though in Achilles mind, try to intervene-)

      .

      BRISEIS: This is wrong, Achilles.

      .

      THETIS: The god Apollo loves Hector

      .

      BRISEIS and THETIS: Do not let him go to the fight!

      .

      (Achilles seems not to hear them, as Patroklos is ritually dressed in his armor)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Patroklos-

      it was you at my side

      when I held my first sword

      you as the guide

      when I took my first run

      through the edging tide

      Now

      you will wear

      my armor

      .

      (Achilles handles the armor with affection)

      .

      This came to Peleus

      my father

      with great gratitude

      on the day he married

      the goddess of the sea

      All the gods rejoiced

      now she was bedded safe

      that Thetis' progeny would be

      no more dangerous

      than me

      .

      Wear it in health

      beloved friend

      .

      THETIS: Don't let him go!

      .

      ACHILLES

      When you stride out alone

      the sight of you

      upon the hill

      will chill the Trojans' bones

      They'll think you're me

      .

      Fear will take hold of them

      while your spirit will fly

      Unleashed by

      my armor

      you'll do amazing deeds

      You'll push them back

      from off the ships!

      Then come back here

      .

      Do not chase them cross the plain

      Do not venture to the walls

      Do not engage great Hector

      He is meat for me

      The sun god fights for him

      So let him be

      .

      (In spot, in Achilles' armor, Patroklos strikes a battle pose; light brightens, isolating him; soldiers gather eagerly and sweep away the tent)

      .

      CHORUS (Whispering on the fly)

      Achilles?

      Achilles?

      Is it Achilles!

      .

      PATROKLOS: Now this is life!

      .

      (As Achilles backs away, watching, battle begins. Patroklos and soldiers give battle cry, turn to attack a swarm of Trojan soldiers who run in to fight them. Briseis, isolated in light, narrates-)

      .

      BRISEIS


      As out of clear air

      shrieking

      the hurricane comes on

      so loud was the scream of battle

      .

      CHORUS (As fight begins)

      Is it Achilles?

      Is it Achilles?

      .

      BRISEIS

      Brave Patroklos

      touched by the spirit of Achilles

      Achilles whom he worships

      Achilles whom he longs to be

      .

      (All fight. Patroklos' energy phenomenal; Trojans begin to be beaten back. Briseis speaks at regrouping times, between actions)

      .

      BRISEIS

      Patroklos wheels

      All Trojans turn about

      seeking only to escape

      screaming death

      .

      (Trojans are pushed back. Briseis cries out to Patroklos-)

      .

      BRISEIS

      They're on the run

      They've left the ships!

      Return now

      Go back and tell Achilles

      Do not chase them cross the plain

      Do not venture to the walls

      Do not engage...

      .

      (But Patroklos' fury only grows, he leads soldiers chasing the Trojans)

      .

      BRISEIS

      Brave Patroklos

      touched by the spirit of Achilles

      Achilles whom he worships

      Achilles whom he longs to be

      Plain Patroklos

      beloved of the boy god

      older, wiser than Achilles

      now feels life-purpose

      surging to its peak

      .

      (Trojans, fighting for their lives, escape through their city wall - and create the closed barrier by lining their tight wall of shields against Patroklos)

      .

      BRISEIS: Do not venture to the wall!

      .

      (But Patroklos storms the shield-wall)

      .

      BRISEIS

      But oh the sparkle

      of excellence sublime

      of clear soaring spirit

      like Achilles

      Oh...to be pure hero

      however alone

      like Achilles

      .

      (As he climbs the wall, Patroklos' head is suddenly thrown back, frozen in dazzling light, and he topples down.)

      .

      BRISEIS

      Three times Patroklos climbed

      Three times he fell to earth

      but as he rose to try a fourth

      high atop the wall

      the sun-god Apollo stood blazing

      and hurled him down.

      .

      GOD VOICE (Apollo amplified)

      Proud fool

      Troy will not crumble

      for you

      .

      (As Patroklos falls again, Achilles' helmet topples to the ground. Patroklos stands bewildered, panting, but undaunted. The shield-wall parts slightly and through it comes Hector. The wall, in chorus, keeps repeating Achilles' order-)

      .

      CHORUS

      Do not engage great Hector...

      Just let him be!

      .

      (As Patroklos tries to gather his strength, a Trojan darts out, stabbing him in the back. Though Patroklos still fights ferociously, Hector bears down on him, throws him to the ground, stabs him in the belly, still gripping his sword)

      .

      HECTOR

      Achilles sent you to kill me

      and your fool's heart

      agreed?

      .

      PATROKLOS (Gasping)

      No need

      Patroklos is no one

      but you do name

      your angel of death:

      Achilles

      .

      HECTOR: Unless I am his

      .

      (Hector jerks his sword out of Patroklos.)

      .

      PATROKLOS: (Dying cry) Achilles!!

      .

      (The instant of Patroklos death, Achilles stands, hearing his cry...

      ...and Hector lifts Achilles' helmet over his own head...

      ...the action freezes in a MIE pose...

      ...an unearthly cry of fury and anguish echoes far away)

      END ACT ONE

      ACT TWO

      Briseis, alone. Soldiers behind. Dark. Lights play on the scrim and mimed shadows of the actions described may appear.

      .

      BRISEIS

      It was a long time

      before I knew

      the kindest of men

      was gone

      Sweet Patroklos

      If he gave his life

      to war-

      War must be a great god

      .

      SOLDIERS

      Patroklos no longer knew

      either sun or rain

      as Trojans swarmed

      like locusts

      upon him

      tearing off the armor of Achilles

      .

      BRISEIS

      Bold Hector longed

      to slice Patroklos' gentle head

      from its soft neck

      to thrust it up

      atop a stake

      to fling his mutilate body

      to ravenous dogs

      .

      SOLDIERS: But Greeks came screaming down

      .

      BRISEIS

      So like two screeching vultures

      clash

      above a single prey

      .

      SOLDIERS

      The armies met and clawed

      above Patroklos

      One hitched his foot

      to a shield

      whipping its sling

      fast round his tendons

      to drag him away

      .

      But that one was hit

      through the cheek of his helmet

      and so

      with soft brain bleeding

      down the spear

      through his eyehole

      he fell as well

      upon Patroklos

      .

      BRISEIS

      Only the horses

      given by gods

      to Peleus

      stood aside

      refused to move

      leaned their heads along the ground

      .

      SOLDIERS: ...and wept warm tears

      .

      BRISEIS: ...for Patroklos

      .

      SOLDIERS

      Ranged in a circle

      the armies pulled

      pulled in all directions

      pulled Patroklos

      as at the stretching of an oxhide

      stretching till it's flat

      till the moisture squeezes out

      and the fat soaks in

      so the armies leaned and pulled

      and there was slaughter

      on both sides

      until the earth ran with blood

      beneath Patroklos

      .

      BRISEIS and SOLDIERS

      Until a sound

      struck the air above

      that made them all stop still

      a sound so strange

      unearthly

      piercing not the ear

      but down beneath

      the root of life

      a wail

      that wedged new terror

      even in the boldest throat

      of all who heard

      .

      (Battle sounds build until air is split with a SCREAM heard as high as Olympus and down to the depths of the sea. Briseis and soldiers fade back. Achilles stumbles on screaming, and throws himself down flailing and groaning)

      .

      (Thetis entering, draws Achilles into a violent dance to match his raging heart)

      .

      THETIS (Urging in rhythm)

      Speak...you must speak

      Let it go

      or the heart will break

      .

      (Achilles will not speak, only dances mor
    e wildly)

      .

      THETIS

      I would Peleus had wed

      a mortal

      instead of me

      For you, my son

      are much too great

      Too great in grief

      Too great in love

      Too great in arrogance

      in bravery

      in anger

      .

      ACHILLES: (Scream) Aaaaahh!

      .

      THETIS: Too great in anger.

      .

      (Tortured Achilles finally collapses. Thetis catches and cradles him)

      .

      THETIS: Speak, speak...

      .

      ACHILLES

      Sweet sweet anger

      As dripping honey

      slows the wind

      it swarms like smoke

      until it chokes

      my heart

      .

      I sat

      a barren burden

      on the land

      and let my friend

      be butchered!

      .

      Was this why

      you feared

      the monster Hector?

      .

      THETIS: No

      .

      ACHILLES: He wears my armor now

      .

      THETIS: You said you would leave this land

      .

      ACHILLES

      Soon

      .

      Mother

      you must get me

      what I need:

      a new armor

      .

      (Thetis alarmed, backs away)

      .

      THETIS: You must not meet Hector

      .

      ACHILLES: Why? If I am the stronger

      .

      THETIS

      Your destiny is clear my son

      Two ways

      lie there for you

      You may choose life

      or glory

      .

      ACHILLES

      What life?!

      The gods have life

      not I

      No man can choose

      Life is only a thing he will lose

      .

      And my second choice is glory?

      But what will glory mean

      Perhaps a sweet release-

      Until I kill

      the demon Hector

      I will have no peace

      .

      THETIS

      If you kill him

      you will die

      Let Hector be

      .

      ACHILLES

      Unless I kill him

      I cannot live

      So get the armor

      for me

      .

      (Achilles raises his hand; Thetis bows, dance of armor begins. The chorus mimes assembling the armor made by the Fire God for Achilles)

      .

      THETIS

      Peleus

      in wedding me

      could not make me

      mortal

      But you

      in childbed

      have done it

      even so

      .

      The mortal mother

      coils a line of woe

      no goddess knows

      It grapples her

      with his first cry

      and binds her

      evermore

      A pull

      from him to her

      command inexorable

      to abandon earth and sky

      upon that cry

      saying

      .

      I am the cause

      of his life

      and I

      must keep him in it

      Try as he will

      to die

      .

      Let the armor woo you

      away from war

      It celebrates sweet life

      fashioned by the God of Fire

      to hold no limbs but yours

      .

      (Achilles moves, eager to wear his new armor, but the Chorus wants to sing of it)

      .

      CHORUS

      The fire-god etched

      the earth upon it

      and the sky

      the great sea's water

      and the tireless sun

      the moon waxed full

      and all the constellations

      .

      And in great beauty spread

      two glorious cities

      with marriages and festivals

      a council and a court

      herds of cattle

      sheep and shepherds

      soft fields tilled

      and teams with plows

      A great ox slaughtered

      grape-bearers dancing

      girls and boys

      and all

      upon an Ocean River

      binding strong the outward rim

      .

      (As Achilles receives his glittering armor, drumming signals a procession coming)

      .

      SOLDIERS (Off)

      Nine long years of seige

      but Troy's wall still stands

      Agamemnon!

      .

      THETIS

      The god did these carvings

      of this earth before

      there was war

      .

      SOLDIERS (Off)

      Massed armies of Greece

      are beaten down by this land

      Agamemnon!

      .

      THETIS (Disappearing)

      Choose life, my son

      choose life

      .

      (A partition screens Achilles from delegation moving toward him; he, donning his new armor, occupies one side; wounded soldiers, led by Agamemnon, also limping, on the other. Soldiers catching sight of Achilles are dazzled, shield their eyes from his brilliance. They may be cloaked to under-dress Trojan uniforms.)

      .

      ACHILLES (Amazed, to himself)

      I feel the armor work

      Life spilling

      its feast of joy

      filling my veins until

      all my fury is distilled

      to gentle wisdom

      and now I see it all

      like a god

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      A long time away

      great Achilles!

      .

      (Agamemnon waits on his side, but Achilles does not respond)

      .

      Too long, may I say?

      Petty quarrels

      shouldn't keep us from...

      Perhaps you'd like news

      of the war?

      .

      (Silence)

      .

      Often I've thought

      our angry words were...

      .

      ACHILLES (Interrupts)

      Enough!

      Your news: the war?

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      Well, we...

      Difficulties come upon us

      Hector rages irresistibly, and...

      .

      ACHILLES: I have some word of that

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      And so many of us gone

      and of those still alive

      the bravest

      lie down among the ships

      all hit by arrow or by spear

      .

      ACHILLES: Yet you are here

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      Because I want...

      we want...

      We need you back, Achilles

      And there are gifts

      I wish to offer you

      in restitution

      for your injury

      .

      ACHILLES: Agamemnon...

      .

      AGAMEMNON (Loud, insisting-)

      Seven unfired tripods

      Ten talents' worth of gold

      .

      ACHILLES

      You dishonored me

      What does it matter now?

      .

      AGAMEMNON: And twenty shining cauldrons...

      .

      ACHILLES

     
    You took

      the bride of my heart...

      Now what did we come here for

      Helen, was it not?

      .

      AGAMEMNON: Twelve horses - racers all!

      .

      ACHILLES

      Yes, it was Helen

      Each man

      loves his own

      as I loved mine

      .

      AGAMEMNON: And seven women of Lemnos...

      .

      ACHILLES

      If you gave me

      twenty times what you possess

      as many gifts

      as there are grains of sand

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      Their handwork is superb

      and their beauty...

      .

      ACHILLES

      I would still go home

      .

      My father Peleus

      will give me a bride

      My one desire

      is to enjoy with her

      the pleasures

      of my own sweet land

      .

      (Agamemnon, astonished and dismayed, plays his last card)

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      I've brought one

      who misses you more

      Achilles

      .

      ACHILLES

      All the fabled majesties of Troy

      cannot be worth my life

      Cattle and sheep can be had

      for the lifting

      and tripods can be won

      and tawny heads of horses

      but a man's life cannot be lifted

      or won again

      once it has crossed the line

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      I return her to you now

      and before all gods

      I swear that she

      never has been touched

      by me

      .

      (Agamemnon pulls Briseis forward, beautifully adorned, and pushes her across toward Achilles. Briseis lifts a hand to him. Seeing her, Achilles is moved, reaches to her, then stops himself-)

      .

      ACHILLES

      She should have died

      before I took her

      for all the pleasure

      she can give me now

      .

      (Briseis stung, twists away, looking for the kind man she misses)

      .

      BRISEIS

      Where's my friend?

      Where is Patroklos?

      .

      (Achilles - struck by her words as if they were a dagger - roars, all his pain and rage rekindled. He strikes down the screen, and Agamemnon sees him bright in his armor. The soldiers cheer, and Achilles' roar winds him straight into battle. Briseis, stepping away from the tumult, narrates. The tent is swirled away)

      .

      BRISEIS

      Like a lion

      when spear-hit

      spins

      foam breaking on his teeth

      Then deep in his chest

      his mighty heart groans

      and lashing his ribs with his tail

      he rears-

      so Achilles' eyes raged

      full glazed

      for the fight

      .

      (Drums. Fighting. A crush of Trojans Achilles whips like a whirlwind, killing one after another)

      .

      BRISEIS

      In fury

      Achilles swept - like fire

      raised by whirling wind

      blazing

      through a dry wood mountain -

      while the black earth ran blood

      .

      (Soldiers fall in heaps and begin to fill the River - which may be presented by a long blue cloth stretched across the stage; shaken, to ripple and flow by Koken)

      .

      BRISEIS

      The noble River

      full with corpses

      heaved in anguish

      unable at last

      to cast his waters

      into the sparkling sea

      so congested was he

      with the Trojan dead

      Achilles killed

      so brutally

      .

      (Achilles grabs an unarmed boy-soldier stumbling past him; the boy slips to the ground, clutching Achilles' knees in supplication)

      .

      LYCAON: Achilles!

      .

      (Achilles pulls the boy's head by his hair and recognizes Priam's son, Lycaon)

      .

      ACHILLES

      How is this?

      The Trojans I killed

      long ago

      rise up to face me

      .

      LYCAON: My life must be charmed

      .

      ACHILLES

      You silly child of Priam

      could the grey sea not hold you?

      I scraped you from a hedge before

      and sold you off in Lemnos

      .

      LYCAON

      Great Achilles, I escaped

      and I'm weary of the fight

      What is it worth?

      You see I've stripped my helmet off

      and thrown down my sword

      .

      ACHILLES: Then feed the earth

      .

      (Achilles casts his spear, but the boy squirms away, then scrambles back, clinging again to Achilles' knees)

      .

      LYCAON

      You got a hundred oxen for me!

      Spare me now

      You've cut the throats

      of both my brothers

      My mother

      was not Hector's!

      Spare me

      Only spare me

      .

      ACHILLES

      You cry?

      Why?

      Patroklos is dead

      who was better than you

      And even I

      splendid, invincible

      with a mother immortal

      will die

      .

      (Lycaon lets go of Achilles, lifting his hands to screen himself. Achilles kills him and flings him into the river, which bellows up angrily)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Lie where fishes

      caring not for anyone

      can feed

      on the shining fat

      of Priam's son

      .

      (The River lurches, the armor of the floating dead clang together)

      .

      BRISEIS

      The rushing water

      spewed

      masses of armor

      cresting bodies

      sputtering foam and blood

      until the River itself

      enraged

      rose on its precious flood

      to curse Achilles

      .

      RIVER GOD (Chorus amplified)

      Brutal man

      do not kill more!

      My living flow is choked

      with your glut of death

      .

      (As though rising, the dead challenge Achilles from within the swirling river. Angry at the challenge, Achilles jumps in to fight the River)

      .

      ACHILLES

      All Trojans die!

      Or give Hector to me

      No howling river

      can save you

      .

      BRISEIS

      Achilles leapt to the middle

      Deep-swirl

      of boiling surge heaved-

      beating down his shield

      with its swallowing waves

      .

      (Achilles is overwhelmed by the river, and disappears within it)

      .

      BRISEIS

      Achilles swept off his feet

      catching at branches

      of an uprooted elm

      dragged the whole cliff away

      The waters ran above him

      and fiercely beneath

      rolling the soil

      from under his feet

      .

      (Achilles struggles to get free as water wraps round him. He tries to run, but the Rive
    r runs after with soldiers making a huge roar, and River falling on his shoulders. He falls and twists to fight back, surfaces gasping, screams-)

      .

      ACHILLES: Gods save me!

      .

      (Red (fire) now streams from the sky, to overwhelm the River)

      BRISEIS

      When Achilles cried out

      all the gods heard

      so down swept the Fire-god

      hurling gales of flame

      to fight

      the heaving River

      .

      (Flowing streamers - red for fire, blue for water - whipped by Chorus/Koken into undulating curliques that fight for dominance amid loud fire and water sounds)

      .

      (Gasping Achilles, still fighting, is finally freed, exhausted, when the blue of the River retreats, followed by the red of the fire, and he turns to look across the plain, where a Wall of Shields has formed)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Great Wall of Troy

      will even you

      do battle?

      .

      (The Wall - chorus members behind each shield - is screaming like a crowd in terror, then through the Wall steps Hector in Achilles' old armor)

      .

      (The Wall screams, tries to pull Hector back inside. Above the Wall, the head of an old man appears, pleading-)

      .

      PRIAM

      Hector, my son

      stay inside our wall

      Have mercy on me

      We all will die

      if you fall

      .

      A young man

      can lie butchered

      still in beauty

      But an old king

      his white hair smeared

      with dung

      and eaten by dogs

      is pitiful

      .

      (Hector salutes his father, but stays rooted, in armor he stripped from Patroklos, to fight Achilles alone. Achilles sees Hector, rears roaring, begins a slow advance. Wall emits a low tone that builds as Achilles moves closer)

      .

      ACHILLES

      You died

      the moment

      you drew the blood

      of my beloved

      Patroklos

      .

      Still there you stand

      brazen

      in armor stripped

      from my dearest friend

      .

      Now it will sear your skin

      till flesh and metal blend

      for in stealing it

      you stole my honor

      .

      My spirit sears you now

      It can't release

      and fly to me

      until it sees you

      to your end

      .

      (Just as Achilles comes within striking distance, and both brace for the impact, Hector spins and evades Achilles by running away)

      .

      (Startled at first, Achilles sharply laughs, and runs after Hector. They may run in place with the wall moving opposite, behind them)

      .

      BRISEIS

      As in a dream

      a man is not able

      to catch one who runs

      nor the one who runs

      to get away

      .

      As when a hawk

      swoops for a dove

      but she slips loose

      and flies

      while he

      shrill screaming

      close after

      plunges again and again

      furious

      to take her...

      .

      so Hector would make for the gate

      and Achilles race ahead

      to prevent him

      and on and on

      one, two, three times

      round all the great walls

      Until at last Hector froze

      .

      (Suddenly Hector's head is flung back, frozen in dazzling light. Achilles stops)

      .

      BRISEIS

      For down swept

      golden Athena

      who loved Achilles well

      but to Hector she said

      .

      GOD VOICE (Athena tricking Hector)

      Run no more!

      Stand

      and we'll take him

      together

      .

      HECTOR (Amazed, to the air)

      You'll fight with me?

      Then Achilles

      die!

      .

      (Hector signals Achilles with an upraised arm. Achilles faces him, waiting)

      .

      HECTOR

      Let us swear an oath:

      If I kill you

      I will strip your sword and armor

      but give your body

      to your friends

      Will you swear the same?

      .

      ACHILLES

      What oath

      can there be

      'tween a lion

      and a man?

      .

      Did you swear

      such kind words

      for Patroklos?!

      .

      (Achilles attacks viciously. They fight. Hector, loosing, looks frantically about)

      .

      HECTOR

      Athena, help me!

      Where are you?

      .

      (Hector is bewildered. Achilles strikes)

      .

      ACHILLES

      The goddess tricked you

      She fights for me!

      .

      (At Hector's vulnerable moment, dazzling light strikes them both. But Achilles, his head thrown back, realizing the choice he's making, shouts as he strikes Hector's neck at his collarbone)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Take my life, then!

      I choose glory!

      .

      (Hector chokes, falls, lies dying with Achilles over him)

      .

      HECTOR

      As you love

      your parents

      do not fling my corpse away

      .

      ACHILLES

      Hah!

      Dogs strip your flesh

      until their fangs tire

      then birds rip what's left

      off your bones

      To see you eaten raw

      is my greatest desire

      .

      (Achilles pulls his spear roughly out of Hector, roaring-)

      .

      ACHILLES

      If this is glory

      it's not enough!

      .

      (A moan rises when Hector dies, but Greek soldiers swarm to celebrate, picking Hector's corpse, tearing off the armor. They cheer and shout, but, as armor disappears in pieces, they quiet awestruck, because Achilles still roars, still stabbing and kicking the corpse of Hector.)

      .

      BRISEIS (Apart, in darkness)

      As soldiers swarmed

      to stab the corpse

      again, again and again

      Achilles ripped his bloody armor

      off of Hector

      pierced his ankles

      lashing rawhide through the tendons

      and whipping horses to a run...

      .

      (Uneasy, soldiers back away. The actor Hector has been replaced by a dummy corpse, which Achilles begins, laboriously, to drag, screaming as he does so)

      .

      ...began to drag great Hector heavily across

      the dry and rocky ground

      Round and round the walls

      his bare head thumped on stones

      .

      (Now horrified, the soldiers run off. As Achilles drags the corpse, red ribbons stream from its mouth, trailing longer and longer as they go round and round a large circle)

      .

      Achilles, in his grief and rage

      Every day for twelve long days

      dragged dead Hector

      'mid billowing dust

      face down

      .

      (Full darkness now, except for Briseis isolated in ligh
    t)

      .

      BRISEIS

      So Achilles embraced

      his purpose in life

      Did he grow

      into a man

      or beast?

      .

      I know only

      the night of killing

      is long

      before the soft dawn

      offers peace

      .

      (Dim light on Achilles, alone, perched over the corpse of Hector like a beast of prey, guarding it. Frightened Trojan soldier sneaks to edge and bows low)

      .

      SOLDIER

      Do not strike, great Achilles

      In deep secret

      honored Priam

      King of Troy

      begs to approach

      .

      (From distance, Priam, disguised and filthy, shuffles hesitantly. Achilles snarls. Priam stops, still far off. His attendant, terrified, runs away. Priam begins a story-)

      .

      PRIAM

      I sing a song

      of the king of sorrows

      Do you know any such king?

      .

      (Priam takes a step to approach, but Achilles stirs, ominous, and Priam stops)

      .

      PRIAM

      This king once stood proud

      atop his golden city

      of the shining towers

      brimming with riches of earth

      .

      And best among his riches

      he counted

      his fifty fine sons

      And the greatest, the kindest

      among all the fifty

      was Hector

      .

      (Priam, watching Achilles, creeps closer, but Achilles snarls, rearing)

      .

      PRIAM

      King of sorrows

      he loses them one by one

      his riches, his sons

      and knows

      when Hector

      the best, is lost

      he'll have none

      .

      (Priam stops his song, goes on humming. Pause. Achilles sharp-)

      .

      ACHILLES

      That king was a fool

      to look for more

      from the gods

      than pain

      A mortal's life

      is spun with sorrows

      though it's true

      he untwines

      evil and good

      by turns

      .

      PRIAM

      Such a mortal I heard of

      named Peleus...

      .

      (Achilles startled, glares at Priam, who goes on humming)

      .

      PRIAM

      ...with only one

      brave son

      who cares not for him

      in his age

      but stays

      far from home

      .

      (Achilles painfully reacts to his own story)

      .

      ACHILLES

      ...robbing other old men

      of their sons

      .

      (Gives a harsh laugh, nearly weeping)

      .

      So Peleus' boy has grown

      .

      (Priam dares a move to Achilles, close enough to stretch his beseeching hand)

      .

      PRIAM

      Let me only

      touch

      my son

      .

      (Achilles screeches like a hawk, shoots up threatening to strike, but Priam dives to catch Achilles' trailing hand)

      .

      PRIAM

      This is the hand

      that killed

      the best

      of my sons

      Is it the hand

      of a lion

      or only

      a man?

      .

      (Then slowly, watching Achilles, Priam draws this hand to his lips and kisses it. Achilles crumbles, sobbing. Priam cradles Achilles. They weep together)

      .

      PRIAM: Why have we war?

      .

      (Achilles looks up at Priam. Long pause)

      .

      ACHILLES

      We'll eat

      and then sleep

      I've gone many days without.

      You as well?

      .

      (Priam looks at him, and nods "yes," then-)

      .

      PRIAM

      First let me

      see

      my son

      .

      (Achilles springs up, sharply-)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Do not dare

      to anger me!

      .

      (Achilles strides away. Now begins a procession of dead and living witnesses- Hector, Lycaon, Patroklos, Agamemnon, soldiers. They gather round Achilles)

      .

      (Priam is separate, waiting, does not see Achilles lift high the corpse of Hector, then ritually cleanse, gently prepare the son for the father. The others slowly sway)

      .

      ACHILLES

      A man

      may gash and tear

      the animal flesh

      of another

      letting spill

      the precious nectar

      of his breathing fluids

      out over the earth

      .

      And this is called

      glory

      .

      SOLDIERS: And this is called glory

      .

      (An animal is raised; Achilles cuts its throat. Priam's fallen asleep where he sits)

      .

      ACHILLES

      I give it back

      Though I cannot choose

      life

      I return

      to the gods

      their glory

      .

      (Lights, sound and company move, as though in a dark whirlwind. Thetis appears; all characters gather to witness the story's end)

      .

      BRISEIS

      So deep into the night

      the father and the son

      honored each other

      with feasting

      and at last

      fell into sleep

      which both had refused

      for many terrible

      nights and days

      .

      CHORUS

      Thetis

      deep in the sea

      do not weep

      that he

      is only a man

      and not a god of the sky

      .

      (Thetis raises her arms in a blessing)

      .

      ACHILLES

      Though weak of body and brain

      I claim

      the courage

      of lions

      to die

      without knowing why

      .

      (Achilles lifts his helmet to arm himself, all others watch; Briseis questions them. They answer, singly and together as a whole society trying to understand)

      .

      BRISEIS: So he must die?

      .

      AGAMEMNON: When the war started

      .

      ALL: or why

      .

      AGAMEMNON: no one knows

      .

      BRISEIS: Forgive me

      .

      ALL: (Murmuring) no one knows

      .

      BRISEIS

      I must try

      to understand

      .

      PATROKLOS

      Man

      is no more

      than man

      .

      LYCAON

      War is a game

      the gods play!

      .

      HECTOR

      We men

      are its pitiful pieces

      .

      AGAMEMNON

      They flick us

      from off their board

      .

      ALL: with a laugh

      .

      PATROKLOS: caring not

      .

      ALL: that our lives drip away

      .

      THETIS (Amplified, as a god)


      War is a game

      the gods play

      .

      Child of man

      can grow

      only high as a man

      has no choice

      but to die

      .

      BRISEIS

      Still I know

      man's glory can fill

      the whole sky...

      .

      (A loud god-laugh that echoes from the whole sky. Priam wakes, hearing the god-laugh, stands, confused, looks at the others, then answers the laugh)

      .

      PRIAM

      Man's glory can fill

      the whole sky...

      .

      (The others join him, and their combined answer gets louder)

      .

      PRIAM and ALL (Softly under Priam)

      ...when he stands

      gazing

      full in the eyes

      of another

      saying-

      .

      ACHILLES: You are as I

      .

      PRIAM: You are as I

      .

      ALL: You are as I

      END OF PLAY

     


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