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    Working on a Song

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    I wanna lie down forever

      Hades

      Hey, little songbird, you got something fine

      You’d shine like a diamond down in the mine

      And the choice is yours, if you’re willing to choose

      Seeing as you’ve got nothing to lose

      And I could use a canary

      Eurydice

      Suddenly nothing is as it was

      Where are you now, Orpheus?

      Wasn’t it gonna be the two of us?

      Weren’t we birds of a feather?

      Hades

      Hey, little songbird, let me guess

      He’s some kind of poet, and he’s penniless

      Give him your hand, he’ll give you his hand-to-mouth

      He’ll write you a poem when the power is out

      Hey, why not fly south for the winter?

      Hey, little songbird, look all around you

      See how the vipers and vultures surround you

      And they’ll take you down, they’ll pick you clean

      If you stick around such a desperate scene

      See, people get mean when the chips are down . . .

      Notes on “Hey, Little Songbird”

      I wrote the first version of “Hey, Little Songbird” on my honeymoon in the summer of 2006. We were staying in a small farmhouse in rural Italy, helping (in a lazy, honeymoon way) with a cherry harvest. I must have brought my guitar along. The first version of the song was a Hades monologue; Eurydice’s interludes didn’t appear until 2007. After that it remained untouched, with the exception of one line: Wasn’t it always the two of us? Eurydice asked, back when we met the young lovers as an established couple. When I expanded Act I to encompass the beginning of their relationship, the line became: Wasn’t it gonna be the two of us?

      The meaning of certain Hadestown songs changed over the years in response to current events. Around 2008, when I’d introduce “Wedding Song” in my songwriter shows as taking place in a “postapocalyptic American Depression era,” there was a lot of laughter and muttering. People were feeling the effects of the recession, so poverty themes hit close to home. “Why We Build the Wall” took on new meaning in 2015–16. Our off-Broadway production coincided with the presidential campaign of Donald Trump, and “Build that wall!” was a chant often heard at his rallies. And “Hey, Little Songbird” began landing differently with the advent of the #MeToo movement in 2017. It was suddenly less funny. There was a moment in the lead-up to Broadway when Team Dramaturgy became concerned that the song might be going too far with its sexual innuendo. We wanted it to be clear that Eurydice wasn’t merely seduced by Hades—she was cold, she was hungry, there was a transactional nature to the relationship. Her I wanna lie down forever line came under scrutiny, but I refused to change it; I loved it too much. In an attempt to address the note another way, I rewrote the first Hades verse to include an explicit job offer. We tried this out in rehearsals:

      Hades: Hey, little songbird, give me a song / I’m a busy man and I can’t stay long / I’ve got clients to call, I’ve got orders to fill / I’ve got millions of souls on my payroll, but hell / I could fit you as well if you wanted

      We let it fly for a few days and Patrick Page owned it like he owns every line he’s ever delivered. Ultimately, though, everyone missed the humor of the original verse, so we went back. In the development of Hadestown there was a long-running, mostly good-natured battle between Team Dramaturgy (Rachel, Ken, and Mara) and Team Music (Michael, Todd, and Liam). Team Dramaturgy pushed to clarify story and character, and Team Music pushed back whenever it felt like the changes were compromising the music or poetry to an unsustainable extent. This is a simplification, since everyone wanted the show to be satisfying on multiple levels, but in many debates the lines were drawn this way. I remember Liam once saying he couldn’t believe I’d “gotten away with” the lyrics of “Hey, Little Songbird.” “It’s, like, three and a half minutes of bird metaphors,” he said.

      WHEN THE CHIPS ARE DOWN

      Hermes

      Songbird versus rattlesnake . . .

      Fates

      Mmm . . .

      Eurydice

      What is it?

      Hermes

      Eurydice was a hungry young girl . . .

      Fates

      Mmm . . .

      Hades

      Your ticket

      Hermes

      And Hades gave her a choice to make

      Fates

      Mmm-mmm-mmm

      Hermes

      A ticket to the underworld

      Fates

      Life ain’t easy, life ain’t fair

      A girl’s gotta fight for a rightful share

      What you gonna do when the chips are down?

      Now that the chips are down

      What you gonna do when the chips are down?

      Now that the chips are down

      Help yourself, to hell with the rest

      Even the one who loves you best

      What you gonna do when the chips are down?

      Now that the chips are down

      What you gonna do when the chips are down?

      Now that the chips are down

      Eurydice

      Oh, my aching heart . . .

      Fates

      What you gonna do when the chips are down?

      Now that the chips are down

      Take if you can, give if you must

      Ain’t nobody but yourself to trust

      What you gonna do when the chips are down?

      Now that the chips are down

      What you gonna do when the chips are down?

      Now that the chips are down

      Aim for the heart, shoot to kill

      If you don’t do it then the other one will

      What you gonna do when the chips are down?

      Now that the chips are down

      What you gonna do when the chips are down?

      Now that the chips are down

      And the first shall be first

      And the last shall be last

      Cast your eyes to heaven

      You get a knife in the back!

      Nobody’s righteous

      Nobody’s proud

      Nobody’s innocent

      Now that the chips are down

      Now that the, now that the

      Now that the, now that the

      Now that the chips are down!

      Notes on “When the Chips Are Down”

      I wrote “When the Chips Are Down” for the very first Vermont production in 2006. Back then it included this semi-mystifying verse:

      Fates: Cross my palm! Grease my chin! / Can’t you see the kind of shape you’re in? / What you gonna do . . . ?

      The Songbird versus rattlesnake intro I added at NYTW, in an attempt to clarify the mechanics of How to get to Hadestown. It was all a bit confusing: there was a train, so could anyone just get on it? No, you had to have a ticket, unless, like Orpheus, you went around the back. I remember Ken insisting that every world has to have “rules,” even a fantastical or metaphorical one. Otherwise the audience can’t relax into the story—they get stuck on square one, trying to figure out what the rules are. The intro was a place to foreground that “ticket” language.

      “When the Chips Are Down” is a song that a few people pointed out was unnecessary to the story, but it was always ferocious as a musical and choreographic showcase for the Fates. The song’s polyrhythmic “feel,” with its iconic bass line and metallic-sounding prepared guitar, came from Michael in the earliest days. During the recording of the studio album, Todd advocated for a barnstorming piano solo. Together with the tight sister harmonies (Liam based these on the Haden Triplets recording from t
    he studio album), the number was electrifying every time.

      GONE, I’M GONE

      Eurydice

      Orpheus, my heart is yours

      Always was, and will be

      It’s my gut I can’t ignore

      Orpheus, I’m hungry

      Oh, my heart it aches to stay

      But the flesh will have its way

      Oh, the way is dark and long

      I’m already gone . . . I’m gone

      Fates

      Go ahead and lay the blame

      Talk of virtue, talk of sin

      Wouldn’t you have done the same?

      In her shoes, in her skin

      You can have your principles

      When you’ve got a bellyful

      But hunger has a way with you

      There’s no telling what you’re gonna do

      When the chips are down

      Now that the chips are down

      What you gonna do when the chips are down?

      Now that the chips are down

      Notes on “Gone, I’m Gone”

      I had recently started touring the folk circuit in the UK, and was walking from the seaside in Brighton back to my friend’s apartment in Hove, when the melody of “Gone, I’m Gone” appeared. It was 2007, and I wrote the piece initially as an intro, rather than an outro, to “When the Chips Are Down.” It was one of the first things Rachel called into question when we began working together. “Gone, I’m Gone” is the moment of decision for Eurydice, so for it to come before “When the Chips Are Down,” Rachel felt, took the stakes away from the song; if her choice is made, why are the Fates still trying to convince her? I resisted moving it at first from a musical standpoint, because I’d written the songs to go in one order and it felt impossible to switch them. But we gave it a shot, and I was surprised to find it still worked structurally, just in a different way. As for the drama, of course, Rachel was right.

      WAIT FOR ME INTRO

      Orpheus

      Mister Hermes?

      Hermes

      Hey, the big artiste!

      Ain’t you working on your masterpiece?

      Orpheus

      Where’s Eurydice?

      Hermes

      Brother, what do you care?

      You’ll find another muse somewhere

      Orpheus

      Where is she?

      Hermes

      Why you wanna know?

      Orpheus

      Wherever she is is where I’ll go

      Hermes

      And what if I said she’s down below?

      Orpheus

      Down below?

      Hermes

      Down below

      Six feet under the ground below

      She called your name before she went

      But I guess you weren’t listening

      Orpheus

      No!

      Hermes

      So

      Just how far would you go for her?

      Orpheus

      To the end of time

      To the end of the earth

      Hermes

      You got a ticket?

      Orpheus

      No

      Hermes

      Yeah, I didn’t think so

      ’Course, there is another way, but—

      Nah, I ain’t supposed to say

      Orpheus

      Another way?

      Hermes

      Around the back

      But that ain’t easy walkin’, jack

      It ain’t for the sensitive of soul

      So do ya really wanna go?

      Orpheus

      With all my heart

      Hermes

      With all your heart?

      Well, that’s a start

      Notes on “Wait for Me Intro”

      “Wait for Me Intro” was a real how-to lesson in recitative dialogue writing. It took time to find the rhymes and carve out the scene, but once it existed it became something of a high-water mark for my recitative; it was hard to achieve that kind of synthesis of drama and poetry in any other scene. I wrote it over the course of a couple workshops leading up to our off-Broadway debut. I remember Ian Lassiter, who played Hermes in one of those workshops, begging for a longer pause between the lines Wherever she is is where I’ll go and And what if I said she’s down below? I’d initially written the lines nearly on top of each other; because of Ian, I put in a measure of rest. In a straight dialogue, the actor and director choose the pace of the language, but metered dialogue puts a lot of that responsibility on the writer, and that “built-in pause” lesson came in handy in many other scenes.

      The line That ain’t easy walkin’, jack came from Chris Sullivan, our off-Broadway Hermes. I’d written the line like this: Another way? / Around the back / But that ain’t a easy road to walk and was mostly satisfied with it, though the vowel slant wasn’t ideal. Chris was rehearsing at home and texted me the easy walkin’, jack idea, asking what I thought. I was unconvinced in writing. Calling him “jack” seemed random for Hermes, who calls everyone “brother.” But then Chris sent a voice memo of himself speaking it, and I was sold. When he left the show (for television glory), I asked if it was okay to keep using the line. He said, “It’s yours!” and now I can’t fathom it any other way.

      WAIT FOR ME

      Hermes

      How to get to Hadestown

      You’ll have to take the long way down

      Through the underground, under cover of night

      Laying low, staying out of sight

      Ain’t no compass, brother, ain’t no map

      Just a telephone wire and a railroad track

      Keep on walking and don’t look back

      Till you get to the bottomland

      Orpheus

      Wait for me, I’m coming

      Wait, I’m coming with you

      Wait for me, I’m coming too

      I’m coming too

      Hermes

      River Styx is high and wide

      Cinderbricks and razorwire

      Walls of iron and concrete

      Hound dogs howlin’ round the gate

      Those dogs’ll lay down and play dead

      If you got the bones, if you got the bread

      But if all you got is your own two legs

      Just be glad you got ’em

      Orpheus & Company

      Wait for me, I’m coming

      Wait, I’m coming with you

      Wait for me, I’m coming too

      I’m coming too

      Fates

      Who are you?

      Where do you think you’re going?

      Who are you?

      Why are you all alone?

      Who do you think you are?

      Who are you to think that you could walk a road that no one ever walked before?

      Orpheus

      La la la la la la la

      Company

      La la la la la la la

      Orpheus

      La la la la la la la

      Orpheus & Company

      La la la la la la la . . .

      Hermes

      You’re on the lam, you’re on the run

      Don’t give your name, you don’t have one

      And don’t look no one in the eye

      That town’ll try to suck you dry

      They’ll suck your brain, they’ll suck your breath

      They’ll pluck the heart right out your chest

      They’ll truss you up in your Sunday best

      And stuff your mouth with cotton


      Orpheus & Company

      Wait for me, I’m coming

      Wait, I’m coming with you

      Wait for me, I’m coming too

      I’m coming

      Company

      Wait

      Orpheus

      I’m coming, wait for me

      Company

      Wait

      Orpheus & Company

      I hear the walls repeating

      Company

      Wait

      Orpheus & Company

      The falling of my feet and

      It sounds like drumming

      Company

      Wait

      Orpheus & Company

      And we are not alone

      Company

      Wait

      Orpheus & Company

      I hear the rocks and stones

      Company

      Wait

      Orpheus & Company

      Echoing my song

      Orpheus

      I’m coming

      Company

      Coming

      Coming . . .

      Notes on “Wait for Me”

      Vermont

      It was the chorus of “Wait for Me” that set me on the road to Hadestown. I was early in my career as a singer-songwriter and driving a lot; back then I’d drive a ridiculous distance, alone, for a tip gig, and that’s what I was doing when that melody came, along with these words:

     


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